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Comment on Best friend by Angus

Angus — Wed, 07 Nov 2007 21:43:33 +0000

hmm. I agree with mr G, cuz that was no twist at all. Just pure sugar. Really, i liked it, but put some salt on that cuz Dang!

Comment on Best friend by Mr. G

Mr. G — Wed, 07 Nov 2007 21:32:59 +0000

I agree with Morgan, it was very sweet.

How could you create a twist in this story? One thought is to have you walking down the street looking for your friends when you find the kid.

Also, you have one line where you need to change ask to asked and then capitalize I’ll.

Comment on Best friend by einsteinhonschke

einsteinhonschke — Tue, 06 Nov 2007 21:58:40 +0000

i LOVED IT IT WAS SO SWEET

Comment on The Harp by emstourtelot

emstourtelot — Fri, 02 Nov 2007 20:26:47 +0000

I really like how you resolved the problem about the man going into the forest and not coming out. I really liked it!

Comment on Mexican Flag by Ruthie

Ruthie — Mon, 22 Oct 2007 20:56:59 +0000

Praise:
I love the way that you describe each color and what it stands for. I like the passion that comes out of the poem.

Question:
Does the eagle in the cactus or the snake have Mexican blood??

Polish:
Just clear up the cactus question.

Very very good job! :]

Comment on Mexican Flag by emstourtelot

emstourtelot — Mon, 22 Oct 2007 20:52:16 +0000

I really liked how you said the eagle’s blood was Mexican, because it isn’t something you would think of at first glance. Is there anything besides that it is just multicolor that makes it beautiful? I like the line the green stands for the hope, but why?

Comment on Hello world! by Mr WordPress

Mr WordPress — Thu, 18 Oct 2007 20:46:14 +0000

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